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Friday, 15 June 2018

my poem

                 Sun
the sun is a hot planet it looks like red and yellow it  does not have eyes. if you ever get close to it might smell like lava     the sun moves around earth back to the same place in 24 hours its like hot as lava so it will burn you it carry lava because it's big and full of lava if you wanna hear the sun you have to dream of you doing it

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