Writing Challenge
While spots of rain fall from the sky, rocks started falling too. The rocks around Mike and Joe are big enough to knockout Mike and Joe. As the rocks fall down Joe was gonna try calling for help but he didnt have his phone with him. but Mike did. Mike takes out his phone and tried calling for help but as Mike was calling for help a rock hits his phone. Mikes phone fell down and broke. There was nothing else they could do so they had to climb down to safety. but then rocks smaller and smaller and then stopped falling. Mike and Joe are now safe. After the rocks stopped falling down Mike and Joe climbed down to the ground. The End
Monday, 4 May 2020
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Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteLove reading your story, and you had me hooked with your opening. Great way to start a story. Would really like to see more descriptive words next time. Great work and I look forward to seeing more of you amazing writing.
Mrs T