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Thursday, 10 September 2020

Horse Tree

Hello Viewers. This is a story i made from a picture showing a horse's head stuck on a tree. and yea. Hope you like it.

 Horse Tree

Start


Michael is a happy fast brown horse who likes to show off his running. He was galloping across the field one morning and looking around, showing-off to people how fast he can sprint.

Setting


The field is bright green and it's clean. The air smells fresh and crisp. The grass feels spiky. There are bees buzzing around the field and crickets are chirping   

Problem


Michael didn’t know that he was running towards a hard tree because he was looking at other people. Michael got closer and closer to the hard tree and crashed into the tree. He was ok because the wood wasn't hard. But he is stuck between 2 branches not letting him out. 

Solution & End  

Michael was sad, embarrassed and guilty because people were laughing at him. But then after a while Michael's horse rider named jockey shouted loudly Michael’s name while he was holding delicious hay. Michael was the horse jockey used for racing. A horse race was going to start in 30 minutes. Then Michael used all his strength to get out of the branches and he finally managed. Then he jogged to the jockey and ate the delicious hay. While he was eating the hay he thought to himself to never show off again. After that he was ready for the horse race.  

 


1 comment:

  1. Hi Michael
    Thanks for sharing your narrative story you have made sure you have each of the major components. I like the way you have set the scene and built into the stories problem. What so you see as your next goal to improve your writing?

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