Hello viewers this week i made a post for my SLJ (summer learning journey) about this fish thing.
yea here it is.
Tuesday, 15 December 2020
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Kia ora Michael, this is Elle from the Summer Learning Journey team.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Fishy False Teeth comic.
Your version of the comic made me laugh a lot! I especially like your story-telling where you can see that the laughter gets quieter each frame because you have used a smaller font with fewer words as it goes along. I also like how you ended the comic; the man wearing the other man’s false teeth definitely explains why he looks so worried in the last frame!
For next time, you could take a screenshot of your comic and upload it on it’s own, as it was a little bit hidden amongst all of the slides. It would be great to see your comic stand out on your blog! Also I really liked how you uploaded a funny close-up of the man grinning, however maybe you could make it a bit smaller? It was at the bottom of the page and made it confusing to find the comment section!
Great story-telling and remember to check out the previous activities that are live one the Summer Learning Journey activity page; I can’t wait to see what you do next! Also, if you visit some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave a positive, thoughtful or helpful comment, you will receive bonus points! Make sure to submit a link to your published comment using this form. .
Ngā mihi nui and keep it up!
Elle (SLJ)