Lock-down 2.0 is fun and boring at the same time because, During lock-down, I get to stay with my parents for a long time, play video games and play with friends from other schools staying at home too. The reason why I don't like lock-down is that I don’t get to hang out with my friends, I don’t get to play sport and; I just like school in general too. In lock-down, I used my time to play games, do exercise and practice a bit of volleyball. In conclusion, lock-down was fun, but I liked school better. The End.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, 23 August 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you've used your words carefully here. It's difficult to limit your writing to just 100 words, isn't it? I think putting "The End" at the end is cheating a little bit, but we can ignore this for now. Is there a photo or other image you could but with this writing to help make it more interesting?
- Mr Mitchell